First draft of album advert for magazine

After looking at this advert again, there are a few things that I know I need to change.

1. The release date of the album. The 4th is a Thursday but in the UK albums are usually released on a Monday so they have a better chance of reaching the top spot in the chart by the Sunday.
2. I need to research the institution Chris Mallette could be signed to and put their logo on the advert so everybody knows who they are dealing with.
3. I need to advertise where people will be able to buy the album from with a link of a logo
4. I don't like the font of the text at the bottom of the page. I think I need to change it to something that is bolder and more block lettering.
5. I want to play around with the image I have used and see if it looks better in a different format.
6. The release date needs to stand out more whether that means changing the colour of it or making it larger I will need to see.